Mr. Wolf started speaking to Henry when he got closer, making comments that made Henry really uncomfortable. He was also drooling and making soft growling noises as he approached. First Henry heard Mr. Wolf accuse him of making comments about him in the past, but he hadn't even been born at that time! When he told Mr. Wolf this, he got really upset and started saying he was stealing his food and water. Henry wasn't grown up yet though, so he could not eat solid foods or drink water like the grown ups. The more that Henry spoke however, the closer Mr. Wolf came to him. After the last comment, Mr. Wolf was growling loudly and pounced. The last thing that Henry saw was Mr. Wolf's teeth.
Even though Henry was young and innocent, this didn't prevent Mr. Wolf from attacking him. Henry's naivety allowed Mr. Wolf to get close and attack, taking advantage of Henry's youth to kill him. Mr. Wolf didn't feel bad for doing this, even though he tried to make an excuse for his actions at first. The moral of this story is that evil people will always find a reason to commit bad deeds.
In the original version, the story is told more from a third person perspective, rather than from the lamb's point of view. It shows how the wolf is trying to rationalize eating the lamb. Even though the lamb is proving all of his arguments to be false, the wolf has already decided to eat him and will find any reason to kill him and justify it.
The link to the story is http://mythfolklore.net/aesopica/townsend/1.htm
(The Wolf and the Lamb, source: http://www.gutenberg.org/files/19994/19994-h/19994-h.htm#Page_43)
I really enjoyed reading your story about Mr. Wolf and Henry! It was very creative, but also very applicable to modern day life. I think your story can be interpreted in many different ways, which is excellent. I really like the picture you used for the story. In the picture, Mr. Wolf is much larger than Henry, which shows the difference in power between the animals. Great story!
ReplyDeleteI really felt a dark tone when reading this story. The way you wrote the story really helped my imagery about the wolf preying on Henry. Same as what Tyler said this story is a very versatile one and you took it in a very interesting direction. The picture you used looks like a classic take on the story. But either way both your plot and the original plot fit the original premise of the story and thats a very cool to see.
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